Project 2 Conference

After my project 2 conference, I feel confident that I am on the right track. Some things that I will work on in my paper are adding more fact-based observations rather than generalized assumptions and adding more content relating to the visuals of my text. I also will be adding a more interesting introduction paragraph that describes my topic on a more personal level. I feel that so far I am making good progress and my text analysis is a good basis moving forward.